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I made a New Story its called wait i realy made this story out of paper lol.ok its called.... The Case Of The Missiong Chocolate Bar :o.Day 1.(Page 1).one day a 16 year old boy named joe wanted to be a chocolate bar he was waiting in line for 5 days!he was waiting until that 5 days turned night thats when he finaly finnishit building his parashoot to get his order befor he got his order the one who made him wait in line for 5 days was a old man the worke who gives away the chocolate bars annoced''Wake up!!!!''Becuse the old person was sleeping The Old Person Annoced''Ah!!!''Joe holerd''I Want A Chocolate Hershy pleaes.Still day 1(at night)The guy who is ganna steal joes milkshake is his dad!den den den!!!he wanted a drink to go with his chocolate bar but he was to tired to eat his chocolate bar or buy a drink to so he went to bed.page 3(day 2)the next day joe forgot where he put his chocolate bar so he looked in the shower, he rememberd he put it in his chocolate volt!he looked evrywear,he could'nt find it he made a chocolate phone to call a detective put he eat it so he just went to the normal phone page 4 after that he called a dectective the detective said'ill be right on the job''!after jow told him all about the probelem then the detective didnot do any work al he did was drink root bear andwhat football guys ill stop right there ill do the rest of the story later -colorguy-